Wildstar ref

This is the leader of the first Clan I am putting in to my new group; My-OC-Clans.

General:

Name: Wildstar [Wildpelt as warrior]
Clan: WildClan
Rank: Leader
Sex: Male
Age: 43 moons [approx]

Family:
Father-?
Mother-?
Brothers-?
Sisters-?

Lives-8 [the 9th he lost in a bout of greencough]

Mate: Snowpelt

Kits:
Sons: Jon [Twoleg, don't ask plz], Hollowpaw, Foxpaw and Desertpaw
Daughter: Whitepaw-deceased

Apprentice: Sparrowpaw [son of his deputy]

Physical appearance: A dark brown tabby tom with amber eyes.

Please comment on Wildstar.

Wildstar @ me.
Ref sheet @ meeshapom.
Lineart @ ?